Deviant Login Shop  Join deviantART for FREE Take the Tour
×

:iconokashi-okami-of-doom: More from Okashi-Okami-of-DOOM


More from deviantART



Details

Submitted on
March 20, 2012
File Size
2.0 KB
Link
Thumb

Stats

Views
410
Favourites
24 (who?)
Comments
13
Downloads
5
×
Those heart-wrenching feelings have long since passed
Of togetherness, of love
Later came the shock of agony
Which I have rose above

Now I see you on the floor
Cold and bumpy to the touch
Remembering the last time I saw you
And how I used to feel so much

Remind me of the days of holding hands
Fingers entwined between fishnet gloves
Passionate, tender moments, exchanging hot kisses
With a girl I used to love

You are round and brown with little black bumps
A cute smile painted for a face
You had a match worn by another
But that was in another place

I don't think much of her anymore
She doesn't come to mind
And I believe it's for the better
To leave the past behind

Maybe she still thinks of me
Running my fingers through her hair
Maybe she still has those photos
But I honestly don't care

I don't know who she's with or where she is
Or if she's got a new madame
But I don't really want to know
Because I don't really give a damn

All I know is that I'm fine
And what's meant to be will be
I've learned that she was not the one
Because there's someone better out there for me

If I ever thought I'd always love her
I'm glad that I was wrong
I will love, I will love, and I will learn
And I will smile on

I don't know or care how she's doing
But I'd like to assume that she's okay
Because I know that I've been better off
Since we went our separate ways

Whether or not I see her face again,
I don't really mind
Because I know my girl is out there,
The one I know I'll find

Plastic cookie, you once brought me love
And you once brought me pain
But I've just thrown you in the garbage
And I won't see you again
First bit of writing in a while....
Pretty self-explanatory.

"You live, you learn
You love, you learn
You cry, you learn
You lose, you learn
You bleed, you learn
You scream, you learn"
-You Learn (Alanis Morissette)

:heart:
Add a Comment:
 
:iconangrychicxwithissues:
.....Incredible.....
Reply
:iconokashi-okami-of-doom:
Okashi-Okami-of-DOOM Jun 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, SO much. :)
Reply
:iconjez123:
Jez123 Apr 11, 2012  Student Writer
Alanis Morissette is a goddess, and this piece is amazing.
Fight on (:
Reply
:iconokashi-okami-of-doom:
That she is~
And thank you, thank you so much! :heart:
I will. Staying strong always feels good. <3
Reply
:icondinladwen:
It's a great view. I think that a lot of strenght is needed to see things like that!
Reply
:iconokashi-okami-of-doom:
Okashi-Okami-of-DOOM Apr 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much. :heart:
And yes, I suppose it does. But I'm strong, and I love love way too much to give up on it because of one girl's decision, haha.
:hug:
Reply
:iconaluress:
Amen! You are so strong.. I wish I could've had the strength to write like that right after my breakup, but.. I was too afraid, I guess.

You go girl! And you're right- that only means someone more amazing is waiting out there for you :3 go get her! :3
Reply
:iconokashi-okami-of-doom:
Awh, thank you so much, girly. :huggle:

Yeah! :D Haha, I'm ready to get back out there~ Despite being FriendZoned by a cute girl I really liked a week or two ago, ah well. xD
But yeah, just waiting for the right one to come my way I guess... ladies. xDDDDDD
Reply
:iconwmskp12:
Wmskp12 Mar 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Love you ninja
Reply
:iconokashi-okami-of-doom:
Love you too, Pip. :heart:
Reply
Add a Comment: